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August 17, 2007
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First off... the Stratics view count was 117!!! That's the most I've ever had for any chapter. I've never
broken 100 before. Either that chapter was really good, or that means the Stark chapter was, and you want
to see more of that. If it's the latter, well, you're in luck, because the next Stark chapter is coming up.
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I'd rather not have parts where I explain everything in the end if I can avoid it. If it was possible to
write it so it's clear how all the pieces fit together that would be great, but I don't think that's
possible. Maybe some of you could figure it all out, but I doubt it.
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I'm very satisfied with this suspense chapter. I think it works better than Chapter V with Draven and Trent.
This one has a much more unknown "unknown". Of course, comparing the two chapters might be foolish on my
part since they're both very different types of suspense. Chapter V had more to do with reading what was
underneath the spoken words, while this was all senses.
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Hopefully Melfina's reasoning and motivations for delving into necromancy doesn't seem rushed. It was all
pretty much done in the previous chapter, and just a little bit more added here.
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01/01/2009 - Rewrite to version 1.80. I originally liked this chapter
a lot. Now it turns out it was the chapter I changed the most. The basics of the story were all there but
almost the whole thing was written way too blandly. A net change of -35 words to 1,284.
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07/18/2009 - Rewrite to version 1.85. Mostly typos fixes. A net change
of -3 words to 1,281.
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