Enlightenment - Chapter VII

August 7, 2007

• This one was also surprisingly fun to write. I was afraid it would be much more instruction like, similar to Chapter IV, but it doesn't feel that way at all. I like the way Forrester turned out a lot. I don't have much more to say other than it came out pretty quickly.

• 12/31/2008 - Rewrite to version 1.30. Too many tense mistakes and fixing some paragraphs that I always had problems with. A net change of -8 words to 1,436.

• 07/18/2009 - Rewrite to version 1.40. Five grammar fixes. A net change of -5 words to 1,431.