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September 9, 2009
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Almost forgot to put this chapter up because of the long Labor Day weekend. I'm putting up the chapter
now, then will get to the document later on today. It's time those are finally hand written again.
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I like this first chapter a lot. It has such a different identity to it when compared to the first
chapters of the other two volumes. It's somewhat like chapter 201, but interweaving of parts of
the Grimoire with the rest of the chapter gives a nice sense of discovery, even though the conclusion
she comes to at the end is really just continuing her decision from Volume 2. And even though I started
out with another exclamation point, at least this time it's about excitement, rather than anger of
some kind.
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Of course there is also the ending document. It was obviously used as a second ending to the chapter,
completely changing the tone of how the chapter ends. Combined with the Volume 3 tagline and teaser,
the volume tells you right away that I'm trying something different.
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