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Welcome to West Luna - Chapter IV




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October 13, 2006

  • It's a good thing I usually tend to start writing the next chapter before I finish the next one that's supposed to be published. When doing the rough draft of this one, I realized that I needed Melfina to have been hit in the chest rather than just her arm like I originally had.

  • Melfina's diary entry was originally planned to be part of Chapter V. I just wasn't looking at my notes when I wrote it. Afterwards, I was done writing it, I took a look at my notes and saw that I hadn't had an idea for the Chapter IV document. It was already done, and fit perfectly, so might as well move it up a chapter.

  • 07-21-2009 - I didn't start recording my revisions until after I was into Volume 2, so I'm guessing a new default starting point for all Volume 1 chapters to be at 1.50. Rewrite to version 1.60. Just minor changes. A few of them, but all pretty minor. A net change of +2 words to 1,599.


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