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December 27, 2007
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I'm not entirely satisfied with this chapter. The end seems to cut off quickly, and just summarizes what went on
with the rest of the day. Maybe it could benefit from more examples of some of the trips to illustrate what went
on, but the chapter is pretty long already. I'll have to think about it some more.
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My previous chapter also recieved 41 views at the White Stagg Inn. That's not the 100+ that I got before the 4
month hiatus, but that's still really great. That doesn't necessarily mean it's because of my story. It could
just indicate the health of that forum. Either way, I'm happy I'm being read.
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01/12/2009 - Rewrite to version 1.30. Not too many changes, mostly just
a typo or two and some small clean up. A net change of -24 words to 1,753.
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01/12/2009 - Rewrite to version 1.70. Lots of changes. The previous
version was embarassing. A net change of -48 words to 1,705.
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