Enlightenment - Chapter II

July 27, 2009

• Three typos and renamed "Researchers" to "Scholars".

• Old

  Word of the occurance reached the ancient city of Wind. The Council of Mages sent Researchers to investigate. They quickly determined it was the location that made the difference, and not the caster nor what he used and how he used it.occurrence

  New

  Word of the occurrence reached the ancient city of Wind. The Council of Mages sent Scholars to investigate. They quickly determined it was the location that made the difference, and not the caster nor what he used and how he used it.

  Typo. And I renamed "Researchers" to "Scholars". I never liked the name. It was just a place holder word to be changed when I found something better. This is the only place it's ever been, but it still bothers me. So I'm changing it.

• Old

  Some apprentices were sent across the land forming gateways one pace after another. After some time, the second was found, and a flood of mages oined the search. One after another they were discovered. First, near major cities, then towns, then villages, and then the wilds. The benefits to trade were obvious, and new cities bloomed where none had existed.

  New

  Some apprentices were sent across the land forming gateways one pace after another. After some time, the second was found, and a flood of mages joined the search. One after another they were discovered. First, near major cities, then towns, then villages, and then the wilds. The benefits to trade were obvious, and new cities bloomed where none had existed.

  Typo.

• Old

  Where's the city! The scribe quickly turns around and the city enters her view. Oh. Yeah, Melfina thinks, slightly embarassed. Luna's moongate was the only one located in the heart of the city, right next to the bank. At least Umbra's was within the city boundaries.

  New

  Where's the city! The scribe quickly turns around and the city enters her view. Oh. Yeah, Melfina thinks, slightly embarrassed. Luna's moongate was the only one located in the heart of the city, right next to the bank. At least Umbra's was within the city boundaries.

  Typo.